情绪描写之积极情绪
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课时7情绪描写之积极情绪
- Recall the following expressions.
描述情感的量词 |
表积极情感的词 |
情感发出的动作 充满、占据、吞噬、淹没: fill, seize, grip, swallow, surround catch(caught),strike(struck), take hold of, wash /come/sweep(swept) over,flood over,creep(crept) upon(爬上) 涌现,萦绕,出现,闪现,蔓延: well up/linger in one’s heart,cross/flash across/spread across one’s face/heart/mind, 穿过,流淌course through/stream through(one’s cells/veins(血脉)/mind/heart) 消失:disappear,melt away 变成,转换成:turn into,be replaced by,give way to |
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Adj. |
Adv. |
N. |
一阵,一波: a wave of... a surge of... a ripple of... |
高兴、喜悦 兴奋、 激动 满意 温暖,感动, 欣慰, 骄傲 |
happy joyful delighted cheerful merry pleased overjoyed thrilled/ thrilling excited/ exciting emotional satisfied/ satisfying, content warm moved/ touched relieved proud |
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与积极情绪相关的神态 或肢体动作 be in high/cheerful spirits情绪高涨/心情愉快 Be wild with joy欣喜若狂 嘴部(笑): Sb wear a smile on one’s face面带笑容 one’s face lights up (with joy)面露喜色 Sb laugh heartily/ burst into hearty laughter/ roar with laughter 开怀大笑 Sb laugh one’s head off笑得前仰后合 smile from ear to ear满面笑容,眉开眼笑 吹口哨:Sb whistle 眼睛(闪光)(one's eyes)twinkle/glitter(with joy), 腿脚(跳舞、跳)sb dance/ jump/leap(with joy) 心(跳):one's heart pounds /beats wildly (with joy) |
与开心,幸福,快乐相关的比喻 feel/ be as happy/delighted/joyful as a king feel/ be as happy as a pig in mud feel/ be as sweet as honey feel/ be on the top of the world feel/be as if/ like walking on air feel/be as if/ like each cell in one's body was dancing with joy |
- Complete and appreciate the following sentences.
- A strong wave of delight seized me the minute I open the gift. 打开礼物的那一刻,我非常高兴。
- The sight of his smiling face melted away all my worries, replaced by a sense of pure joy.
看到他的笑脸,我所有的担忧都烟消云散了, 取而代之的是一股愉悦感。
- The moment I saw his smiling face, all my worries gave way to a sense of pure joy.
当我看到他微笑的脸庞时,我所有的烦恼都变成了纯粹的快乐。
- Filled with satisfaction, he felt as happy as a king. 深感满意,他犹如国王一般幸福。
- She was so delighted that her feet tapped rhythmically against the floor like a secret dance.
她高兴得双脚在地板上打起节拍,像在偷偷跳舞。
- With excitement coursing through his veins, he couldn't wait to share the good news.
他血脉中涌动着激动之情,迫不及待地想分享这个好消息。
- Excited at the prospect of winning, her heart pounded in her chest.
一想到即将获胜,她的心在胸膛里怦怦直跳。
- Observe and summarize:
S1-S5:情绪描写在
主语(主句/状语) 中,除此之外,句子还用什么形式补充句子的什么内容?
用the minute/the moment引导状从补充了主句发生的时间;用分词短语补充了主句的结果和原因;用so...that...补充了主句的结果。 S6-S7:情绪描写在
状语(主句/状语) 中,而主句则描写在这种情绪下人物
所做的事情或肢体动作。
总结:在写作中要强调突出情感时,可以单独用一个主句描写情感;当急于推进故事情节时,可以将情感描述放在状语中,从而不影响主句推动情节。
用主句描写情绪的常用句型:S1-S3: 无灵主语(用无生命的事物来做主语):①(a wave of+) 情绪名词+ 固定动词+sb as/when/the moment/at the sight of...
②The sight/view/though of...fill sb with情绪名词/make sb. 情绪形容词
S4: as adj/adv. as...比喻手法S5: ③
so...that...(可用完全倒装)用状语描写情绪的常用句型:S6-S7:形容词/分词(独立主格结构)/with复合结构,主句(sb do sth). 描述情绪 与该情绪相关的肢体动作/推进故事的动作
- Complete the following sentences.
- Excitement gripped the audience as the winner was announced.当宣布获奖者时,观众们激动不已。
- The joy of accomplishment filled my heart, as if each cell in my body was dancing with joy.
成就的快乐填满了我的心,仿佛我身体的每个细胞都在快乐地舞蹈。
- A look of excitement crossed/flashed/spread across her face.她脸上露出激动的表情。
(*无灵主语可以是:情绪名词,情绪的表情a look of..., 看到/听到的事物the sight of.../the thought of...)
- Translate the following sentences.
- I was on the top of the world as I eventually gained an A for my paper.(用比喻句)
当我的论文最终获得A时,我非常开心。
- His face lit up with excitement as he realized the potential of the project.
当他意识到这个项目的潜力时,他脸上露出激动的光芒。
- 看着眼前的美景,妈妈满面笑容,眼睛闪着兴奋的光芒。
At the sight of the beautiful scenery, Mum wore a bright smile on her face, her eyes glittering with excitement .(划线部分用分词作状语)
Seeing the beautiful scenery, Mum’s face lit up with joy, with her eyes glittering with excitement .(划线部分用with复合结构)
- 难以抑制心中的喜悦与兴奋,小男孩高兴得跳了起来。(形容词作状语)
Unable to contain the happiness and excitement in his heart, the little boy jumped with joy.8. 他非常激动,感觉身体里的每个细胞跳起舞来,眼里噙满了泪水。
①He was
so thrilled that he felt each cell in his body danced with joy and tears filled his eyes.(用so...that...句型)
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So thrilled was he that he felt each cell in his body danced with joy, with tears filling her eyes.(把so放在句首的倒装句)
9. She felt happy.(改成无灵主语,并进行适当拓展)
A wave of happiness swallowed her at the thought of reuniting with her old friend, her heart pounding wildly .
- Micro-writing: 用4-5个句子来描述你抽中百万大奖时,你和你朋友的感受或肢体动作。
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