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写作高级句型巩固练习之动作描写


时间:2025-07-08    作者:    阅读:


课时3:写作高级句型巩固练习之动作描写(2)
  • 翻译
  1. 她兴奋地下车,又笑又跳。
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  1. 男孩们冲到湖边,脱下衣服,跳进水里。
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  1. 歌手瞥了一眼观众,深吸了一口气,开始唱歌。
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  1. 托尼毫不犹豫地冲向罗斯,紧紧地抱住她,帮她擦去脸颊上的泪水。
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  1. 她听到这个意外的消息,惊讶得目瞪口呆。
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  1. Jane发现了Tom,立即上前拥抱他,她的眼里充满了喜悦。
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  1. 我冲出公寓,沿着街道跑,热泪盈眶。
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  • 改写
  1. The young man stood frozen. Her entire body trembled uncontrollably. Her mind raced with thoughts of what might happen next. She could feel the weight of her anxiety crushing her chest like a ton of bricks and makes it difficult to catch her breath.
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  1. Mark held the microphone tightly and stepped onto the stage. Her eyes sparkled with excitement. He took a confident stride forward. His voice boomed through the hall. “Today, we make a change!” he declared. His arms swept out grandly and caught the audience’s attention.
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  1. Tom’s heart raced. He madly searched for his wallet. He searched through drawers and drew them open so forcefully that some items fell out. He drooped to his knees. His eyes scanned every inch of the floor. His hands patted the carpet desperately. “Where on earth is it?” he complained. His breath came in short gasps.
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  1. Anna hid behind the curtain and peaked out with one eye. She tilted her head slightly. She tried to catch every detail of what was happening outside. Her body was hunched over, and she held her breath. She didn’t dare to make a sound. Every few seconds, she’d dart her eyes around and made sure no one noticed her.
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  1. Jack trudged onto the deserted playground. His head hung low. Each step seemed to carry the weight of his disappointment. “How could I have done so poorly?” he muttered. His voice tinged with self-reproach. He stared blankly at the empty track. He felt that a swirl of regret and determination welled up inside him.
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  • 微场景写作
考试前的紧张准备:
动作链:盯着手表注意时间流逝->环顾四周看到同学们复习的表情->低头检查物品是否齐全->心跳加速,深呼吸让自己冷静->再次默背重点知识点->教师走进教室带着试卷走进教室,宣布考试即将开始。
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